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Sunday, August 14, 2011

Two animal attacks (summerize and paraphase)

Shark attacks

 Many tourist goes swimming always has fear of being attacked by a shark.
It is possible, but it's highly unlikely to be attacked.
It is more likely to be struck by lightning. The coastal states of US said there are 180 people are struck by lightning, but only 11 people are attacked by sharks.
Also, drowning have chances of 1 out of 3.5 milion, but shark has only 1out of 11milion.
However, ways to reduce being attacked by is to travel in groups and stay out when you have a cut, because shark have a good sense of smell

Bear attackes

 2nd paragraph

  Although ist is possible that you will be attacked, it is extremly hard to happen.
In fact, there are chances are that if you run into a bear, the bear will be very scared of you and go away by itself.

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